"So you worked at a deli in high school, did telemarketing in college and had a brief stint at your brother-in-law’s marketing firm. And maybe there are some gaps between jobs.
This resume simply isn’t appealing. While you likely learned useful skills at each position, your resume doesn’t tell a story -- it doesn't reflect that you've been working consistently toward finding a job like the one you're currently applying to. Your resume is a lot like a first date: It has to make a great first impression and it has to make your date (the future employer) think you’ve got lots of qualities in common."
I recommend reading #5 as well, which is related: Your job is no longer relevant.
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